Personal opinion, I would kill the first like 15 seconds of it. I really like what you did to the music here. Sounds really good man! Make it a loop. All video game music loops! lol
This is a really groovy sounding kind of song. I wish I could make stuff that cool. T_T
Im oldly drawn to this, it has a dark feeling. good job
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.