Dude this is one really cool song! I really like the vibe of it, I can feel frustration and chaos. I like what you did with the snare and how you made it stand out. I can also bump with that bass line, its so tasty!
It ends abruptly but I do that shit too in my music too.
I can see this being refined a bit but I love it as is.
Thank you man, and yeah it is definitely not as refined compared to more recent work of mine.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.