This One Night

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This One Night

Author Comments

Really quick deal for the Newgrounds VA contest! I didn't have much time so I threw this little number together and didn't have enough time to get proper sound effects. Hope you enjoy it anyway though.

It follows the story of main protagonists Jim and Will while they try to remember what the hell happened at the club last night.

The song at the end there is the theme from Cheers.

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JaShinYa

2013-06-07 17:28:07

"This One Night" by MrBiggsProductions*

Acting- /50
Range- /25
Fit- /25
Mixing- /20
Originality- /15
Writing- /15
TOTAL- DQ/150

Comments: You've got a lot of dead air in your recording. I would also suggest lowering your mic level down a bit to get rid of some of that and to keep your sound from distorting. Background music would have helped a lot too. The first 2 voices were very similar. As far as your acting is concerned, it wasn't bad and felt pretty natural, but I would have liked to have heard a broader emotional range. Also, more of the third voice would have been nice. Lastly, the "Cheers" theme music is not royalty free which is why I have to DQ you.

TheSledgeMan

2013-05-01 14:03:46

I really dig it, but I would try more of wider range though.

MrBiggsProductions responds:

Thanks man!

I would have formulated a different voice and affect for each of the characters, and probably added in more, but I had only found out about the contest about an hour and a half before the deadline. heh.