Nice

So this was nice I like your work here and there does seem to be some random tunes in there and that's cool but this was kind of too short guess it's a good loop but even then it could be stretched out to be longer just an idea

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Could be stretched to be longer

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Not too bad for a first tune! It would sound much better if it had a steady melody though, the music seems a bit random in this, and that background beat a tad bit monotone. Also, maybe a little less echo, unless you add more instruments? Keep it going!

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