I can't lie to you, I almost gave you a bad review because I began reviewing before the song was finished playing, chalk that up to my own impatience.
In any case! Here we go!
The piano and the synth sound you chose to do the melody with don't really match and create a little more dissonance than I was expecting. However upon further inspection I found this to be tolerable if a bit odd.
However the rhythms going in the background almost cover up the melody at some points, personally I find this a tad distracting from the main melody. This is easily fixable though, and not really an issue if you turn the background down by 6-10%. Of course this is all my opinion, take it with a grain of salt, but this song is near greatness.
Overall enjoyable, a little busy but that could be my own personal tastes.
Cheers