Very nice gating effect!
I thought you were going to be a total n0b at music or something, but this beginning sure impressed me!
It gave the name 'dark tunnel' justice, I tell you that. The little drum samples you brought in were great, they sounded very glitchy. I was just about to suggest making the song more full by adding some misc percussion or something, but you just did that with the hi hats. Nice =)
I mostly like the part where you brought in this awesome funky bass groove. I like it alot =D
You did a great job on this piece of music! Keep t up! Could you check out my audio page sometime? I'd appreciate it =)