Great song you have made there! It just feels like there could be more to it. The ending of the song is rather sudden and unexpected if you are not watching the time bar, so an idea could be to make the ending perhaps slightly longer, and add something else to it so that the song doesn't just seem to stop.
Hope this helps! :)
it does help a little. i wasnt really aiming for a full song with this.
but if you want i can make it longer and add more. :D
just gotta message me