Reminded me quiet a bit of Carbon based lifeforms, with perhaps a touch of Algol and the variance you would expect from an Asura piece.

It was pretty good, it sounded familiar. I would definitely keep up the work, man.

I third the fact. You are frontpage material.

I agree with JTNightFury.
You belong on the front page.
And if anyone says no, I will tear of their limbs.

-Aaroca-
MUAHAHA!

I really love this,and yet I'm confused....
With stuff like this,you should be on the front page(after all,it is epic is it not?)