Reminded me quiet a bit of Carbon based lifeforms, with perhaps a touch of Algol and the variance you would expect from an Asura piece.
It was pretty good, it sounded familiar. I would definitely keep up the work, man.
I third the fact. You are frontpage material.
I agree with JTNightFury.
You belong on the front page.
And if anyone says no, I will tear of their limbs.
what is front page?
I really love this,and yet I'm confused....
With stuff like this,you should be on the front page(after all,it is epic is it not?)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.