(Note - I review pretty harshly, so don't take a low score personally! I don't vote harshly.)

At 2:11 you introduce an instrument that sounds out of tune. Be careful.

Like I said I review pretty harshly. That's because I don't really understand what it means if someone reviews like 100 songs and the lowest score they give is a 7. Are they really that in love with every song they hear? 4/10 isn't like "I hate this song", I consider 5 to be an average song. But anyways...

This song shows potential but it's going to need a lot of work to really make it shine. It's really based around just two riffs over its entire 4 minute duration, which makes me feel that it doesn't really justify its time with constant interest. (This is not a hard and fast rule, but it's something to keep in mind.) It starts feeling quite repetitive even early on. This is easy to fix though. Make some new melodies. ;-) There's an easier fix too, but it'll only help a little: Toss some filters over your melodies, make the timbre of the sounds constantly changing, etc.

On the other hand I do enjoy your work with synthesis. I noticed on your user page that you had been working with massive - keep it up, I can hear that you've been practicing :-)

Feel free to hit me back with a review if you have the time. I scouted you for the AP, so good luck!