ITs ok the bass thing is beating up the snares I think xD
I think the power of the main lead or bass sound should be dropped a little its overpowering the other sounds a bit to much over all its not bad I do like the melody that comes in.
Also I think it was good that you cut out the main melody at the 2 minute mark cause it does get a little repetative you should leave it out a little longer before bringing it back in I think none the less good job on this :)