Very nice

This was very nice and the vocals are pretty good too actually the vocals are very welldone and made very well for the backround music it all seemed to come together, this track could be longer though seemed short but besides all that it was a great piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it a bit longer if you can.

~X~

Nice!

Great song. Nice music, nice lyrics, nice everything. Very listenworthy, keep up the good work!

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Pretty good

i liked it, better then i could do, I play guitar but i suck at recording. I use fruity loops too though, vocals werent bad pretty catchy

So true...

mmmmmmmmmmmmm... chocolate...............
Yum.

sounds good!

this sounds pretty good! I like the vocals!:p(just kidding)
the piano part at the refrain is cool too