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I don't think this song is finished--something seems to be lacking--but I can't think of what to add to it so I'm putting it up as-is. I might develop it later if I can figure out what to do.

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DivoFST

2013-03-27 15:09:09

This is a bit confusing...i feel like you rammed a lot of pre made loops against each other and some things didn't really work out.
The intro is pretty nice, and the guitar that comes until 00:27 is pretty nice as well but it is very low and is barely heard.
From that point on the song falls flat in the ground..the synths that plays after is way too loud and suffer from some clipping every time it enters the song..and the sound (not sure what it is) that plays during the guitar parts seems out of tune with the song.
So, overall this suffers from a lot of issues but largest one i have to say is the Mixing, things are just way too loud or way too low during all of the song and the song plays the same thing over and over during 2 minutes.
Dont get me wrong this is a constructive review and my objective is to try to help you and thats why im being so honest and harsh with you.
Keep working Ciara!