Love the feel of enthusiasm to this track and the tune.. Maybe a subtle low bass line would have helped it along. :)
That's the summary of my thoughts for this. The music itself wasn't bad, but there's a mouthful of speaking to digest there and they're both competing for attention. This is compounded by the effects on her voice. Nice if used now and then, but it's overused almost as if you're TRYING to show that you can do it. Nice, but it makes it a pain to listen to what she's actually saying.
In summary, less effects on her voice, and let the music and her voice not compete for attention so much. It'll work better to help get the message to stick in people's minds. Also, try to make it shorter, by the end of this I don't think anyone can recall much from just a first listen, and it's the first listen that you want to make count.
~ (Dj-SkyFall ) Thanks i really appreciate it you'd be surprised on how much work went into it, but non the less thank you for taking the time to reply and im really happy to have some one like you give a strong honest opinion, i will use it to improve my song as a music producer but also for my group, i hope others will take the time and review as well, no one can become better if they don't take the criticism and opinions of others, once again i appreciate your reply and for all else its always good start...
~ (DJ-Zephyr(armandragon)) Thanks for your review :) it gonna help us to improve.
the point was an intro not a rap song or some random lyrics...it introduces the group and it was intended to get people interested, don't get me wrong i like your suggestion but do you really see a rapper with that song?? i would understand some very selective vocals because of the beats and the melody was meant to go with the voice...
Definativly He is right !
I like this track a lot guys. I think the girl talks a too long though, you gotta get a rapper or something.
We Apreciate your comment , well our girl was a little bit ill when singing .
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.