This isn't really sad. It has more of mystery feel to it. Nice job anyway!
Goes down smooth...easy to listen to over and over.
You nailed the chilling part -- or at least it seems as if a criminal is plotting something dastardly -- but sadness, not really. I get "cold suspicion" and "cruel intent". Percussion is good, but it could use some variation every now and then, or at least some reverb; it doesn't feel very... human? Perhaps that's the intent. Loops well though.
i used your song
Its good, but not sad, it feels more like Crime Scene Investigation, or a Post-Apocaliptic underground, and i agreed, if you want the Sadness, take off the Kick and Hihat
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.