Hey man a real solid composition you got here! I just have some constructive criticism for you, i hope you dont mind.
Right now I feel the song is a little empty. Yes you have wonderful composition, rich piano, but all your frequencies/synths/hi-hats seem to be in the higher end with only your kick and piano dwelling in the lower end. Where's the bass/fx? It just sounds a little unbalanced in my opinion. Another tip is that you can change up your drum loop every 8/16 bars or something to give it a little variety.
This is my opinion though! You've got talent that's for sure. The mixing sounded great, composition all made sense, it just felt a little empty to me.
Hope you didnt take offense to this, just try to help a fellow artist out!
Keep it up, have a good one
Hey man, no offense taken, I love constructive criticism, helps me to get better!
I'll taken everything you said on board, clearly from other reviews I need to work on bass ends a lot more. Thanks though for taking the time to listen and review :D
this is great man, excellent work. total 5 stars
Thank you good sir :)
This is just excellent...
Thank ya very much :D
Honestly, this disturbed me.
I didn't know what to think of it. My mind wanted to relax to the wonderful piano, but freak out to the beat and bass at the same time...
It confused me.
Well, i guess not everyone can like it
Nice piano work man!
Thanks mate :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.