Not the best...

I liked the intro, it had alot of potential. Btw, what BPM is this at? Oh, and i can tell you use FL, ;)

Anyways, its too random, and that beginning drum loop doesnt loop well, its ever-so-slightly off, :( I wish you kept the same instrument in and just added new ones, because when you started to without-notice switch from "synth 1"(i dont know its name) to Gold Saw, it was just weird sounding. Oh and this sounds like a demo, any chance of a full version?

Anywho, alright effort, i enjoyed the tempo of this piece and the rest of the song up until that Gold Saw hit in, :(