I don't remember how I found this piece... but honestly, I don't see the reason for all the negative feedback.
It's pretty simple and essential, but it sounds pretty good to me. Might be an interesting one for a flash game.
Also, I've read your comment to the last review: sorry, I hope you're better now!
Hmm... It's a shame you submitted these long ago when the audio portal was quite different and much more aggressive. I hope you didn't take certain comments to heart because these were ok for how old they are. You did ok and should only ever be encouraged, if you are willing to put in the effort.
I quit making music and went into a long deep depression because of the feedback I got here. I still have cuts on my wrists as evidence. But thank you for the nice words.
Three times a charm.
Not bad. I like a part of it (the end seems good).
i agree with everybody below me