A very well done mix of trance and dance. I Like this track. The unique sounds you use in it. As far as constructive criticism goes, if it were trimmed down to maybe two-thirds of the present length, or if the breakdown that comes in at 3:00 was maybe 30 seconds sooner, or if there some sort of similar climax/peak like at 1:30 in between, it would definitely bring some more energy to the song. When you have the beat come in 4ish minutes in, I think a sort of dubstep warble would be very good there, tastefully of course, and not at an excessive volume. Sort of a bassy texture to bring some more to the track for a little while. The beat's perfect for it. Maybe another sort of peak/climax at the end just before the sort of fading at the end of the song. As for what it is now though, it's definitely refreshing that it's not a typical sort generic dance track, like a lot of what you see on NG.
4/5 9/10 keep up the good work. :D