I can't even describe in words how good I like this.
i like this
I don't know anymore.
Vote 6, ladies and gentlemen.
I don't care that it's impossible. Fuck you.
"Evening has burned this world to gray.
The ashes of so many fade away.
x2
Fading dawn of muses fallen
Dusk rises diamonds and pollen.
Evening has burned this world to gray.
The ashes of so many fade away.
Fading dawn of muses fallen
Dusk rises diamonds and pollen."
I can't even describe in words how good I like this.
i like this
Your songs have a bit of peculiarness with their vocals; the tempo of the words moves... oddly. When I try to walk alongside (musically) i keep stumbling. It's fascinating.
Equally fascinating are the lyrics themselves. Diamonds and pollen. You have a tendency to conjure strong imagery, and this song is no exception. I'm caught between a volcanic wasteland and the cold, blue-lit aftermath of something fiery and destructive.
The instrumentation seemed a little ill-balanced; it kind of hurt my ears a bit, and not from volume. Still, it wasn't too bad. And other than that, it was (quoting LoveSickWolf) "just sexy"
Glad you enjoyed.
Most of my songs are rather poorly mixed simply due to the fact that I use garageband as my one and only musical program. This was also my test version as well.
I really do appreciate the reviews and am happy to note that the songs inspire such imagery.
-X
As an aside, "diamonds and pollen" was a reference to the Marilyn Manson lyrics and eponymous song they originated in.
just sexy
You know it.
-X
The song was interesting, though the instrumentation was a bit muddy. Not sure if that was intentional or not. However, but let me give you a little advice on etiquette.
Don't ever ask people to vote 5 on your songs, even if you think they deserve 5s. Doing so actively discriminates your songs from getting 5s, even if they do deserve them. It's better to say 'Vote fairly, ladies and gentlemen.'
If you honestly think I typed "vote 5" because I seriously want someone to give me a disingenuous score, then you have a serious lack of the understanding of my psychology.
Don't tell me what to do. It's my song, and I'll type what ever the fuck I want to.
Good day.
-X
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.