I honestly can say that I don't think that Drum n Bass is the proper genre to label this as; it's more of a goa style (to get technical), and is more suited to techno if you ask me.
I also liked the riffs you had going with FL Slayer.
Overall, I could picture this for an action scene, but I wouldn't really count it as drum n bass.
I'm honestly not surprised you don't want to make this an official track, as it isn't the best composition overall.
It is a good start, however. We all have room to grow :)
i am a techno artist not a DnB artist it's not easy
good one but whats with the title.....DooNooBoo
D(rum)oo Noo B(ass)oo xD Drum and Bass
Love it but a little too short. In 1:14 I was waiting for anything more :(
I just made it really quick for a friend, anyway thanks ^_^