Dobry Dobry. Akorát na intro bych Pluck než Lead. Z Leadu Pluck tak, že stáhneš Sustain ve Filter envelope na 0-15%, delay, reverb a pohraješ si s Decayem v Envelope v onem filtru ( by bejt vedle Sustain, na programu ;) )

Docela jsi se ale ;) Jen tak dál

Love how it's so climactic and energetic, but the snare/clap at :27 caught me off guard. Maybe you could transition into that better. I found the rhythm around 1:17-1:50 was a little too "busy" for me...it just didn't seem to fit with the dreamy, ominous beginning of the piece. Something that came in at 1:02 didn't help the piece, I felt...maybe it's the same instrument you used for the rhythmic section at 1:17 and 2:11. The instruments at :56 didn't seem to compliment each other, either. Also, I felt like you could've done more with the drums in the song, especially after 1:50. The ending was a little weak...I just don't think fade-out endings add anything to songs in general. On the plus side, I liked the various moods of the piece and the engaging, climactic beginning. It's pretty unique, and that melody at :42 is definitely a keeper. ;) Sorry to be so tough on you, and hope this review is helpful. Happy holidays! :)

nice