Nice audition, bro. Try warming up your voice a bit more before recording though. Your enunciation needs work.
Thanks, friend-o. While I don't really warm-up, I do take several takes that I scrap until I come up with a good one. Unfortunately, I often find myself going, "Eh, good enough," when I really shouldn't. (Also, it may have had something to do with the fact that I was recording the last two-thirds of it at 4 AM)
But thanks for the suggestion. Maybe I'll do it the next time I try to voice something.