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Well I like this and think this is really "SOLID" this is some deep sound I do think you need some faster build up but thats just an opinion you have an amazing piece of sound here with some quality, you have some reall good talent here its really good stuff it was my pleasure to review this.

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I do think you need some faster build up but thats just an opinion you have an amazing piece of sound here

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It starts off a little slow...but it's also pretty climactic so I'll let it slide. ;) It's very distorted and creepy, which is a good thing! When that riff came in at :33 I thought it was just kind of wierd, but the "melody" at 1:36 really added a lot to the piece. It got a little repetitive, though. I think you should bring out that back-up melody that starts at about 2:25 more. Sorry to say this, but the ending is weak. It's like the beginning- slow and quite a bit boring, to be honest. Sorry. That bass at 3:53 threw me off a bit- I thought you were going to do something more with the piece, but you didn't. It's still a good quality piece with a lot of potential, but it needs to be more engaging and less repetitive. Hope this helped and keep up the good work! :)