Original Project. I've had this one sitting still for a moment, when suddenly some kind of inspiration came to me and I eventually finished it :D
I'm pretty happy with the end result. I think it has a strange kind of two-sidedness to it, which is an interesting feel I guess :D Either way, I like, and I hope you do too!
Enjoy!
General Eq work needed it sounds like. Allot of conflicting hertz areas are in there. It also sounds like the entire song is piled into a single track. 1:34 that part that comes in was entirely too powerful. It was eating up the entire song, i would guess it was over 0db by itself. Try keeping each chan below -8 db pre master which gives you a little of room to master sections that need it. ( the kick being -8 and the loudest part of the mix)
Pretty good regardless of a few things
Tbh I rarely go into that much detail with mixing and sound levels. I agree with your point that the part at 1:34 is much too loud, I'm not sure why that slipped by me, I might just go and correct that, but all in all, I go pretty much by ear when it comes to mixing my songs, unless something technical prevents me from doing so. Still, I appreciate your feedback :)
I generally don't like trance at all but, after hearing this, I really want to give it a go!
You have a lot of skill and I'm glad I came across your song!
Well first of all thanks a bunch man, I'm glad you like it :D Whether or not this can be called trance I'm not so sure. I don't care much for labels like that, because often they don't fit very well... Doesn't really matter much anyway :D
Love the industrial feel of it.
It stays interesting the whole time.
It's got this charm about it. I don't know if it's the melody or the effect you made, but it's so charming.
Love it <3.
Well thank you kindly for the words :D I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I agree by the way, it does have a certain charm to it :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Septyrikon 
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