Nice
So this was pretty nice, I like this "TRACK" it has some really nice sound here it has a very nice "FLAVOR" about it with some intense twists all through out it I was highly impressed with this one, you have some skills for sure, I do think you could make this with some added backround effected sounds, but honestly its a really nice piece you have here.
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I do think you could make this with some added backround effected sounds
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