More melodies and also they need to fit better to eachother. it started to be a bit interested at 2:10 but the the song was almost finished. I think u need to try to make a more energetic intro and also to try to make the song have more energy because then more people are gonna like it. and if the intro is good more people are gonna vote/review
Keep it Going!
~Forever Bound~
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