Alright so you have something good here, the sounds was differant, and i like the unique-ness of it, allthough there seemed to be something missing it was still a good start here. This was kinda nifty, i like the unique sound you got going on with this one, and you seem to have alot of that same sound going throughout so that brings-out some other things that could make this better, maybe have some other types of sounds in there then you could add more of a build up and such. And now that we come to the end here i would like toclose offby saying it was a pleasure with this tune, it was pretty interesting and entertaining at the sametime, hope to see more soon so keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so i wanted to try and suggest some options, and some small advice that could benefit you and your work, maybe you will like some of the options or maybe you wont but here you go anyways but do hope it helps with some better resluts on your work here. This has some decent sounds, but there was too much of the same soundsin tis it could be better with other sounds along with it including some better build up.

Super Mario Bros. would be much better with this while tripping....REALY good man.

That so cool it makes me want to go play some games.