I would have to agree with ForeverBound here. The song was cool but it is very quite in the beginning and the ending needs some work; and make it a bit longer as well. Other than that nice just and keep it up.
this sounds pretty cool. only the ending wasn't so good and it was a bit quite in the beginning.
Keep it going!!
ps: plzz check out my songs ;)
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