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Author Comments

Still poking at this short attempt at a song. I'm still learning and I'm actually a little stumped on what to do.
Any and all criticism is welcome.

Enjoy.

Reviews


I noticed a "loop point" if you will, what you should do at these points is add something different. A bass-line that does an erratic rhythm, or an additional harmony part.
Also, your ending leaves the listener hanging. If this is what you intended bravo, you accomplished that swimmingly.
However, if you were reaching for a definite ending you need to finalize the chord more. Don't leave an unresolved chord hanging or it results in a definite drop in emotion after all that building.
Good attempt though, I look forward to your future submissions.


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Credits & Info


Listens
384
Downloads
27
Votes
6
Score
4.36 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 13, 2012
8:53 PM EST
Genre
Trance
File Info
Song
2.4 MB
2 min 4 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.