even better than the first

i thought that was hardly possible. Also, i have shared some more of your stuff on my channel, you can check those out also. they seem to be the biggest hits...

nine outa ten

good job i love it i may be dark but i look for light songs lol :)keep it up

Very Very Nice

This song really kicks ass, I love the lead... WAY BEYOND AWSOME!!! The very first sounds a little dry though. HAHAHA I have the tune stuck in my head... Nice job.

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This sone is so sweet!

I thought it was really creative how you have the voice where he counts down (5, 4, 3, 2, 1, Zero), and then you make it sound live and have it echo. Now that is creative lol.

I also like the choice of synths that you used in this song. Especially the synths in the backround about 1:40 into the song.

Overall: a 10
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Sweetness.

My first reaction to those high pitched synths were a bit doubtful, I won't lie. But then I sat down and thought to myself "Why did he do it?". I know by now nothing you do is purely random. At the transition at 0:42, I realized that to carry over to that point worked wonderfully.

Where did you get the cheering sounds? So real! Truly makes the song feel like a dance song, you know, where you rave and dance, and jump, and possibly make fun of other people because their break dancing reminds you of a paralyzed goat... but I digress.

What really impresses me, is this song uses the same foundation melody for throughout the whole song, and yet it never gets boring. The constant changing of the secondary layer on top of it keeps it fresh, and exciting.

It does change melody wise at 2:31.

Oh my god, you killed Techno! ;).

My friend, you need to get a better microphone. When I want to record myself singing or anything, I place the microphone an inch below my lips. Close enough to record the voice, out of the way of the breath to remove that distorting breath noise.

Melodic wise, this song was absolutely amazing. I can see you progressing in skill as I go down the list of songs.

Last minute of the song was pure orgasmic, wrapping it all up.

Breakdown ending, worked out pretty well.

I have nothing to suggest in making this better. Easily another 5/5 from me.