I don't know what to say about this one, I'm conflicted. I think you could have been more outright with it, despite the whole ambience-ness of the piece. It did bring to mind Final Fantasy sort of, and some Dungeon Crawling games with some rather gorgeous caves, but it didn't bring to mind anything of your title! You just didn't reach that splendor, exoticism, and wonder of being in a world of ruins, or being in something like the Greek ruins. It was a good peice, but I believe that music tells a story, and much like a writer, you must elaborate that story. Work on it, and keep it up Soul of Fire! Or would it be Fire Soul? I don't know, my Latin's rusty.
Sincerely,
thedethbot