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Author Comments

This is an indie pop song I made with a friend Bossjohn Carpenter. Together we're called Sour John.

Bossjohn wrote and recorded the lyrics. I did all the rest.

Although I think it's a good song, and Bossjohn said it was the first song by us he felt others might like too, it was for some reason never finished. Bossjohn sent me only 2/3rd of the total lyrics. Halve of which had clicks in it. I tried to repair all as well as I could, but I could not use all of the lines. The song contains only 1/2 of the vocals it was supposed to have. I tried to make up for it by adding more instruments where backing vocals were lacking.

It is what it is. Maybe it been better, but it never will be, so just enjoy.

If you like it. You can listen to all other Sour John songs here:
http://www.youtube.com/pl aylist?list=PL73B3FEEDE92 6E472&feature=mh_lolz


Nice man! I love the song keep it up!

Can you take a few seconds to look at my songs?

Thank you!

I read what you said to these people below who don't like your mix. I had a similar discussion about this with a friend of mine. Songs nowadays are mixed way too clean. I don't like it when they come with a new "re-master" of a good old seventies song. I like the old classics. The mix is an important part of the sound. If you change that it's no longer the same song. Why do they have to ruin it? I like this song as it is. It's pure honest and human. You gave good arguments why you made it this way, so I know it's exactly the way you want it to sound. Don't let a bunch of people who don't get the song tell you what to do. Please don't change it.

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SourJovis responds:

Thanks. I just make music I want to make, and it's always very nice if other people like it. Some constructive criticism doesn't hurt though. It can help you reflect on what you do, sometimes make it better, and even more the way you want to. Because sometimes you make mistakes you don't even realize, and it's handy if other people point it out. Like I said I won't change this version of the song. I won't change or remove it. But I feel it could be interesting to play around with it though and make an alternate version (remake). Actually I've been wanting to do that for some time, but I've never had a good reason to.

Great song , man. Good work and keep it up!

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SourJovis responds:

I will!

This is pretty damn good for an unfinished song. Can't wait to hear more songs from Sour John.

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SourJovis responds:

Thank you! There's a link in the description to a list of Sour John songs on youtube. Those are all the published songs. I'll upload all of them on here too eventually and make a playlist.

so did he died?

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Credits & Info


4.55 / 5.00

Nov 7, 2012
8:24 PM EST
File Info
11.5 MB
5 min 3 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.