Snares feel really quiet, drums and bass are the focus of drum and bass (go figure, right?) but the drums felt tacked on, and there wasn't any focus on bass.
Your transitions and filters aren't too bad, they change fairly rapidly, but I was under the impression your purpous was to demonstrate some new found abilities related to them.
You'll get there yet.
hey thanks i appreciate the input. This is the reason i post stuff even when i know its not the best, so i can learn and improve.