The song is pretty good. The whole song sounds like it is just underwater though if that makes sense. It's all pretty drowned out (pun intended). The high hat from the drums are a little quiet. You should make that a little louder, it will give the song a fuller sound. If you mix the instruments together a little better, you can definitely get a more full sound out of this, because right now, one melody is overpowering the rest a little too much, and you need to bring the rest up to the same volume. The song is pretty good other than that though.
If you don't mind, check out my new song "Stranded", leave a review if you are up for it :D Any feedback is good feedback
4 star rating (giving you benefit of the doubt :D)