That was pretty cool. You seem like one of those guys who want to make a song out of noise, rather than the other way around. The core section (starting at 1:30) was pretty neat, and the whole thing is produced immaculately. Seriously, I have no idea how you got everything to sound so clean. You must do some dark magic.

Criticism - I felt that it maybe lacked a core motif? I dunno but maybe that was the point? The central point could be a little *more* somehow? ...

I really enjoy the experimental feel of this piece, and I feel like my criticisms are almost pointless in the face of it. Good work.