I love it.
Simply love it.
It's really relaxing and soothing with this ood but nice feeling on top of it.
Overall: Its a gud song ;3
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I suddenly remembered an old melody that I once created, which is strange because I thought I have already forgotten it. I added few more melodies to make it longer. It is still unfinished, indicated by a "UF" in the end. I'm still looking for other vsts other than Edirol that I can use plus, I ran out of creative juices. I need to recharge for a bit by taking a break.
I'm posting it still for maybe other people can give me some advice on what instruments to be incorporated or perhaps on the melody itself like something is off, etc.. :3
I was very moved by this piece.
Vlaireice32989 responds:
Thankies, I'll work on it maybe next time to enhance the mood. I just put the basic melodies :3
At about 1:27, the rhythm is strange - it sounds a little off like it could be tightened up for maximum effect. It mostly goes unnoticed, but it sounds like an "almost" hesitation. As if the player's fingers almost didn't hit the correct keys. But that's a minor thing - like I said, barely noticeable.
Also, the transition from the intro line to the initial melody is a little rough - I'm not sure what it is, but it's like something is missing there. Maybe that slower intro could be expanded? And the transition to the end it a bit abrupt.
But as far as other instruments, possibly flute or viola/violin, and cello. I'd love to hear some wind instruments included, possibly weaving their way subtly around the melody - counter-melody? Harmony? I don't know...
Other than that, though - it's beautiful. When I first started listening to it, I got teary-eyed, and I think I looped it 5 times just to hear it again.
Vlaireice32989 responds:
Hey, thanks! I'm not really a one hell of a musician, but some melodies seem to play on my head for some odd reason and it's a waste to let it fly away from my head. I'm planning to put accompaniments and pads to put some ambiance in it. Yep, the intro is strange, I know. I'm still thinking for a proper intro. I still need to rearrange the melodies to bring a certain climax.
You're such a great help to spark my creative skill! I got stuck, just like a writer's block.. O,o Thanks again! :3
Well played and a great idea. Hope you'll produce more!
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