Might want to let up on the drums, it's painfully obvious that you have the same track all the way through the song.
I'm going to just go with the fact that you were going for 70's metal and under even that, a metal song never just.... BANG... Starts, should focus on the guitar, yeah, but a band is a band... Each member would have its own section to shine, and so far all i can hear is a guitar with variation, who keeps returning to the same chorus
keep working on it
Very enjoyable sounds like a song for an adventure RPG or open world game very nice overall !
This was very enjoyable to listen to, especially the lead. The bassline was interesting with a sort of warp feeling to it and seemed to compliment the lead in a very futuristic/ adventure type way.
The drums did their job, but were somewhat generic sounding. If you were to change or improve this song in any way, I would start there.
This really wasn't that bad! I enjoyed the all around melody you produced, though more diversification during various intervals would have been nice. Great background audio to an adventure game or something like that. As said before, don't know if I would classify this as really Heavy Metal, but the tune was nice and I'm glad I took a listen!
I like this. It says you're not scouted even though a guy below me said he did, but I scouted you anyway.
The only thing wrong with this piece is that the mix needs a lot of work to sound good. I also don't know if I'd call this heavy metal, but it is very epic adventure sounding.
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