Messinround1

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I just started to use FL studio a few weeks back but have had great interest in learning how to use the program. I'm really looking forward to progressing and learning new things about producing different types of EDM. So long story short, every song i end up posting on here will be a way of me getting some constructive criticism from some people who may know more than me. If you took a listen, thanks! don't be scared to throw out any pointers, ill gladly read them.

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adonnias

2014-12-13 14:53:57

Good start. The B part should play over the A part sooner though.

jawalker213

2013-12-17 21:24:20

I liked what I heard, and the beginning was nicely balanced. I suggest being more daring with the melodies... for example, there could be a second melody, or a counter melody on top of the original melody... or a b section...

Atlas

2013-09-07 23:47:49

A little repetitive.
I like the melody even though it's pretty simple.
That fade in at 1:36 and then on until the end was just really bad. I would've felt better without it.
I wish you luck on your EDM journey!