Welcome to the Oldschool Hip Hop Portal bro.

I dig the sample, and the over all sound. Im not really a fan of lofi stuff, but this has a creepy vibe to it, which is right up my ally. I I think if you had everything but the kicks, hats, and snare on lofi, this would sound much better, but thats just my opinion.

Not a bad experimental track for your first upload man. Good job.
keep up the good work and I cant wait to hear more from you.

I like it lots of potential but I feel like you need to work on compressing and make those drums more boom bap like.

The sample in this is tight dude! Great effects on the sounds, I just wish the drums hit harder. It could make this track soooo much better.