Nice song bro
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A song about the lamentations of the Titans, after their great battle with the Olympian Gods.
Original Song by: Bacon92
Guitars & Vocals by: SoundBorNe
Evermore Lyrics
BRINGETH DOWN
We swore to battle them,
Betrayed by our kind,
Eyes locked in to embrace,
The descendants of Time,
He would dismember them,
And cast the souls to bed,
Devoured children; fathered Gods,
At least that's what He said,
Now see Him for what He was,
A Titan cast in lies,
And if the Earth should come to ash,
They'll bring down the skies,
EVERMORE TO TARTARUS,
They'll bring down the sky,
[SOLO A]
We've seen a thousand times,
A dark apocalypse,
Tear into Olympus' sides,
I can't see what this is,
Sworn to hold the heavens high,
And never let them down,
And if the sons of Time should win,
They'll bring us to the ground,
BATTLE THEM IN INFAMY,
WE TEAR APART OUR LEGACY,
THEIR WORLD BECOMES OF OUR DESIGN,
THE SKIES WILL FALL TO SONS OF TIME,
If His prophecy reveals,
The Titans come to end,
Then what hope left does mankind have,
Should children seek revenge?
[BRIDGE]
Look into the Father's soul,
We're broken by His lies,
Evermore, we mourn His sins,
They'll bring down the skies,
[SOLO B]
Nothing left for us, but pain,
The pit has bled us dry,
Evermore we suffer now,
They're bringing down the sky,
BRING DOWN THE SKY
Not bad, but definitely could be better. The lyrics are great but the problem is that the voice is too faded. You need strong vocals for a song like this. Fix up the guitar solo around 2.20, that's just terrible. It sounds terrible. Definitely reconsider the genre, this doesn't really fall under Trance. It has too much of a Metal feel to it for it to really seem like a Trance song. The lyrics are great, and for the most part the song is great in general. But the vocals need to be stronger. The one thing that must be kept in mind is that Vocals must always be able to be heard. If the instruments overpower the vocals, then you've stuffed up and need to raise the volume of the vocals. I've seen many songs go wrong because they added some sort of silly effect to the vocals when they really should have just left them alone. This song is definitely no exception. Regardless, good song, needs improvement.
This is really well put together. The music and lyrics fit nicely. I can picture buying this after you've signed to some big record label.
Unfortunately, I'm confused on how it's "trace." Seems more like Metal... Or Metal / Trance.
You might consider putting an instrumental version up, if you haven't done so already.
Though, I don't agree with the previous reviewer Sacrosanct... I actually enjoy the vocals... Mainly because it fits in as ambient noise rather than actual lyrics. (Like listening to a song in a foreign language.)
Everytime i see a song with vocals on newgrounds I immediately leave the page, because the vocals always ruin what could be a very good song.
This is no exception.
music is good, but I don't really think of the defeated titans with it. It sounds more like a rise up type song.
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