Not bad, but could be catchier...
But it's obvious this background music. With this in mind, it is very well laid out, and hope you find success in your business...
Minus 1 star for entire track being all in 3/4 beats a measure. I know you could throw in some diversity in some of the tracks in your soundtracks to make you stand out more :P
but again, good luck with finding work :D
Thank you for your feedback! I understand, from an artist's perspective, what you mean about the diversity. From the perspective of a professional soundtrack artist though I have to think about the needs of the media producers. I've found that too much diversity can hurt a song's usability. I often intentionally pull in the reigns of creativity when I'm composing a song. The artist in me wants to explore a song's potential and keep it interesting purely for listening purposes, but every time I follow that path I inevitably get someone saying "I was going to use this is my project until it completely changed directions half way through. After that it didn't fit anymore."
Thanks again for you feedback and taking the time to listen!