Kicking beat you have
So right from the get go this was kicking good beat here, love the fast tempo you have going on it, it was a nice touch, and you really seem to mix it up aswell, giving it some nice sounds and even some effects, i wouldnt mind even more mixture of other sounds, but also focusing on more build up would be a blast, but for the mostpart you have done well here.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now as for some improvments dont know where to start but i will do my best in suggestion some possitive idea that can make it better but then again its already decent, so anyways here are my thoughts on the whole piece. Well i did suggest more build up and more mixture of sounds, and also it could have a much better ending something more explosive.