Cool song. Definitely has this mix of old and new school Metallica. I could just HEAR Hetfield barkin' over this one. Guitar is a little fizzy sounding. Could use some bottom end too. That little interlude at 2:28 was too short! That was an awesome line and could lead to some epic solo... you should extend that out!
Anyway, sounds good man. I'll definitely have to check out your other stuff.
Up the irons! \m/