Nice and that.

Just the same problem, the kicks are too distorted or high or something. Start with one thing at a time, maybe the strings or piano being built up first then bring in a drum loop, diversify that with percussion etc. Then, bring in the strings.

Still cool, even though the drums at first sound out of place.

Kinda soothing..

the drums seem a lil out of place tho. nicely done, however ^_^.

(BTW; btw is by the way rofl(rolling on floor laugh))

_-'L33t_Fate'-_

Nice, needs a bit of work

ok, I think I know what you're trying to achieve here, but I think if you're trying to express yourself emotionally, you need to cut back on the extra snare hits and that strange kick drum sound.
Take it back to basics, maybe a kind of Moby style drum loop would work better with the piano and strings you have going?
Remember, keep it simple! just sounds like you're going for a bit too much.
Also, with the strings, bring them in later to give the track a bit more of a sense of building up. The piano needs to be developed first in my opinion. The strings sound a little bit distorted sometimes btw, some compression issues? Be careful not to overcompress the track.
Overall, a good track, but maybe rethink it a little.