The beginning sounds like something I'd be humming to myself and never quite satisfied with, but made actually good. That not-quite-pointless multiple notes rather than one longer note...
I like it. A bit repetitive at one point but still pretty good.
Techno+Retro=Awesome!!! Good Job Parkerman (Y)
the sounds aren't balanced, i want to hear more melody!!! (also, mixing could be better)
stellar. i so wish to make the fat beats the way you do.
One word: Amazing.
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