Pretty solid lyrics and melody-- That chorus reminds me of Do Re Mi by Nirvana, just a little bit, with the drawn out "me".
4/5'd and favorited man, Rock on.
On a side note, the sheer length of the asphyxiation at the end was just hilarious. If a dramatic effect is what you're looking for with that, I'd shorten it a little.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.