I really like it, the melody is strong all the way through. I was skeptical at first about the start, but now I think it fits really well. The bit where the melody cuts out could use a bit of work, as if it was a carpet, that part would be fraying
I'm not a big fan of the percussion, However everything else sounds damn solid. I liked it over all. Personally I would make it a bit longer. You have nice melodies and a good mix, expand on it!
Thanks, my friend said something very similar! Thanks again for the feedback ^_^
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