No.

That's a really good start. :)
I feel it goes at it a little harshly though. Try easing into it a little more.
And obviously it needs to be longer. But a nice intro and a drop with some glitchy and mechanical wobbles would make it great, in my opinion. But your the artist, it's your decision on what to put in it. Just some advice. ;)

Keep it going! I feel a drop coming on!