its good, I randomly clicked on a page and scrolledfaced down and this is what I hit, I think the sequencing is fucking great, this is really what I am aiming at myself but my form is sloppeh still xD.
Was really digging the style you had, and just wish the drop was harder not gonna lie, everything else was smoooth sailing, Im not one to complain about drops since I cant even figure out how to make them yet but just my imo, not trying to be a dick :], & not final like you said so I can see it going big

Really AWESOME!

I like the build-up allot!
Yes I would say just stick with it and the end result would be much pleasing!