I liked it just as it is...I wasn't too slow for the mood that it gave and didn't feel dragged out (its a trance song). Good mixes with excellent transition placement. keep it up and hope to hear more from you!
Pretty good. I think it could use some more work though. In my opinion, it builds too slowly. The beginning was very repetitive. The melodies are good once it gets going, but I feel like there isn't enough content. I get the impression that this was a short song that was just dragged out.
I only use the demo of FL Studio and it's hard to make a good song if you don't have all the tools. Plus, a lot of the sounds don't go so well together, so I have to improvise. Once I have the full version of FL Studio, hopefully if I do, I'll be able to make better sounding material.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.